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Monday, October 25, 2010

'Witches' Chapter Critique Courtesy of Clarissa Draper




Awhile back I bit the bullet and signed up for a chapter critique from Clarissa Draper at Listen to the Voices (see right hand sidebar). I nervously handed over my first chapter of Witches Don't Wear Socks. This morning, I found her critique of my chapter. I don't know what I was so afraid of; I'm still blushing from the kind comments she made, as well as the comments from other bloggers. Go check it out at Listen to the Voices.
If you'll excuse me, I'm overflowing with new ideas for my story. Gotta go! ttfn!

23 comments:

RaShelle said...

LOL - Love the kitties! Gonna run over and check out your chapter. You're a brave, brave soul.

Caroline Tung Richmond said...

Haha, love that pic! And yay for helpful critiques! I'm glad that it was so positive!

Saumya said...

Yay!! I loooved it and cannot wait to read the final product in stores :)

Stina Lindenblatt said...

Congrats and having such a great experience. First chapter critques are always scary, especially when so much is at stake.

Eliza said...

Hi just read the critique and the chapter, loved it. Have you finished it yet?

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